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Great adaptation, terrible song

I like your version, but I hate Rick Assley and all he stands for. >.<

Awesome!

Definitely the best thing I've heard on NG thus far. This kept me interested all the way through, I can't offer any advise at all!

Garage band at it's finest

Don't like Garage band, but you made it sing.

DJ-Dax responds:

xD I'm Glad You Liked It, =D

O.O

Hats off, man.

Redo bass.

Great song, I loved the solos. However, the bass line threw me on the timing. I'd recommend, also, adding more instrument loops. Maybe some chords on a hammond or rhodes?

yayman223 responds:

ok finally someone how tells me what the problem is exactly, and also apperciates the solos, ill fix the bass just 4 u

Thnx 4 ur review :)

Needs more tracks.

Add an electric guitar and bass, man. I'd LOVE to take a solo over this...

One note: the intervals you use at the beginning, while correct, are a bit jarring. O.o

Completely does the song justice.

This is amazing, quite simply. Waters would be proud.

Great, but wrong genre.

Dude, phenomenal song, first of all. However, it isn't classic rock. I don't know what it is, but it ain't classic rock. if you added a cool guitar line, though, which I recommend you do, then it would definitely be in the right place, and perhaps you could lengthen it a bit.

Very cool!

I'd say, however, shorten the introduction by maybe ten seconds or so. Other than that, almost perfect. Possibly add in a hammond, or a rhodes. That would sound really cool.

pedrosura responds:

Thank you for your review. Here is a video of the song live in 1981.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HrkVWV gwwfc

Take care,
Pedro

Intro is way too long

You need a drum beat and a bass line of some sort. The solo is pretty great, but the riff gets a bit annoying. I kept expecting a drum fill. Serious potential though, you got some chops!

yoda2112 responds:

yo...thanks for the advice..ill keep it in mind.
i actually just finished mixing the bass in today but the drums might take a while
my drum synth is on my old computer and .....well....thats gone..so if you have any programs you could suggest im open....thanks ..

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